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๐ in the quiet corners of my heart, a secret dwells, a tale of love, my soul silently tells. i watch him from afar, with a longing so deep, a love unspoken, a secret i keep. his eyes hold a sparkle, a captivating gleam, yet, they shine for her, in love's sweet dream. his laughter echoes, a melody so clear, yet, it's her name that i fear to hear. in her, he finds his sun, his moon, his stars, while i'm just the observer, watching from afar. i see their love bloom, like a flower in spring, while my heart weeps, a silent suffering. his touch, his gaze, meant for her alone, while i stand in the shadows, love unknown. his heart beats for her, in a rhythm so sweet, while mine echoes in longing, in a beat incomplete. my s i s t e r , his love, they're a picture so perfect, while i'm the silent poet, my feelings kept secret. i pen verses of love, of longing, of pain, a testament to a love, that'll never gain. yet, in my heart, a flicker of hope resides, a dream that maybe, love will turn the tides. that one day, his gaze will meet mine, and in his heart, my love will shine. but reality whispers, a bitter truth, his heart belongs to her, since our youth. and so, i love him from afar, a love so pure, a silent symphony, i'll quietly endure. in the quiet corners of my heart, a secret dwells, a tale of unrequited love, my soul silently tells. a love story written, in the stars above, of a girl, a sister, and their shared love. so, i'll continue to watch, from the sidelines, cherishing the love that could never be mine. for in the end, it's his happiness i yearn, even if it means, my love will forever burn. @soul | plagiarism is a crime.
what do you guys think about this poem?
I can feel it babe , but it does hurt in reality.
This poem is so beautiful. I love it! I hope you have a great day, beautiful! Love you!
The poem is Sooo heart touching and beautiful. It describes my love for him Sooo perfectly that I can't describe. You've wrote it so beautifully. Keep going in making poems. Luv u
Wow! so beautifully articulated โค๏ธโ๐ฉนโจ
U wrote this? Cuz it is beautiful, babe just like you ๐๐๐ซถ๐ผ
Can't express how much I love this poemโจ๐ค...the way you could perfectly define the beauty of the unspoken and unheard words ๐and even how those painful feelings disappear in thin air leaving only the pure love dust onto them๐๐ซ...
This poem is so deep and it sounds sad ๐ you have an amazing talent of conveying sadness in a beautiful way through this poem ๐ผ If you are through this , it must be so hard to love him through all of this pain . You have been strong to endure so much . Your kindness and quietness is your strength ๐ชท๐ชท๐ชท
The poem is just as amazing as you are + it relates to the pic attached, the story of 'Lee Su-ho, Ju Kyung and Soo jin' in true beauty โคโค
I also had a similar experience, so it deeply touched my heart, love this ๐ฆโจ๏ธ
That's soo good. All your poems are beautiful just like you. I hope one day I could write like you in depth โจโจ. You are a motivation just go on ๐
Dreamfora 's new poet acadia!
this poem is just... SO PAINFUL yet BEAUTIFUL.
WOAH....
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